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However, there ARE alternatives that I can see that SHOULD appease the gods(Patreon), yet at the same time SHOULD still keep the story in a more believable atmosphere. That would explain the hiccup in the story by switching to the term "Landlady" instead of "Mom" or "Mother". (It couldn't be more plain.) Yet, Patreon told you to keep it away from incest. The entire story revolves around YOU and this "Landlady". With that, let me begin with the obvious. Proofreading it before publication never hurts. It wasn't TOO bad, but definitely needs work.